All Comments on 'Cat & Eagle - Her Birthday'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
"Splash splash - he is bathing?

What are you? Three? There might have been a story in here but your writing style was so distracting and so juvenile that it made it impossible to tell. A totally failed offering.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

Is this written in another language then translated into English ? There are so many spelling and grammatical mistakes that it's almost impossible to read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Get an editor. This was awful.

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