I have read a few of your submissions, and they are very good. I really enjoyed this one though. Keep up the goof work.
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Anonymous03/23/06
Very nice job!
Good writing, next time more details on the act of deflowering and it's just perfect!!
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Anonymous06/06/07
the old west
very good story, keep up the good work!
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Anonymous01/02/10
No clue of female anatomy
Good story but her ''shield of protection'', WTF? Women have a hymen right at the opening of the vagina, you can see it if she opens her legs. It's only ever partially covering the entrance. There's nothing a few inches inside that you can press up against or break. It ruined an otherwise great story.
English
Great writting
I have read a few of your submissions, and they are very good. I really enjoyed this one though. Keep up the goof work.
Very nice job!
Good writing, next time more details on the act of deflowering and it's just perfect!!
the old west
very good story, keep up the good work!
No clue of female anatomy
Good story but her ''shield of protection'', WTF? Women have a hymen right at the opening of the vagina, you can see it if she opens her legs. It's only ever partially covering the entrance. There's nothing a few inches inside that you can press up against or break. It ruined an otherwise great story.
please continue
great please let there be a sequal
HOT
Hot!!!!
vice is nice but incest is best
home, home on the range where the cowboy and his daughter play....keep it in the family...cannot beat it...
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