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by Angeline02/11/09

The title may be yellow

but the poem paints blues to me. Lovely, and very evocative images. You do form well. :-)

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by twelveoone02/17/09

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a song without music, rhyming coplets, last stanza suffers from being forced, triteness, very strange from you.

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