All Comments on 'Whaddya Gonna Do?'

This poem flowed as easily as good conversation. I like it loads. :)

It just bombarded me with one familiar, evocative image after another. I very much relate to the urban working-class world you've painted so well here (read my poem Chambers Street if you have a chance, and you'll see I really get where you're coming from). Very tightly constructed, too. Really well done. :-)