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bflagsstbflagsstabout 15 years ago
UYS

some very good lines, great use of forlorn and preen.

WickedEveWickedEveabout 15 years ago
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Really great work on this poem. This line is fabulous: huddled in the tree tops unpreened and forlorn

GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasureabout 15 years ago
Good show!

Nice work UYS! That must have felt good - it did reading it.

Tess

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