All Comments on 'Kitty Cat Capture Ch. 01'

Same old, same old. Ok for a first start, but obviously the next chapter needs a lot more development and creativity. You tried to show her as a icy bitch, but it did not come off very well. Henry and his buddies seem like idiots with no plan -- one wonders why they are risking jail for this. BUT, with some development... it can go somewhere. Perhaps when she wakes up she kicks their collective asses, forces them to suck off one another, then seduce Henry's sister! Anyway, you need to do something different and creative.

Nice start. Waiting for Chapter 2- But South Africa has a bit of a point - it should take a bit more than 4 horny frat boys filling every orifice 24/7 to turn Cat around - use a little imagination here, Please. BTW - what's a "CHURB"?