All Comments on 'Me, Myself and Daddy'

Wow! What an amazing story. Very erotic. Please keep posting.

sex only if he has to tie a woman up--That is an action for WIMPS--A MAN does not need to do that.

Fantastic i loved the tying up the anticipation of being fucked while tied is a huge turn on . The flash back of her first time with daddy was brilliant please continue the story and their erotic adventures together Mmm cant help but rub my wet pussy .

Wow did this story turn me on. So full of hot taboo sexuality. Also very well written. One of the best I have read.

To the person who commented on the 'daddy' only wanting to have sex with a woman tied up, you are an idiot who didn't read the entire story. Nowhere did it say that he would only have sex with her while she was tied up. Some men like to have sex with women tied up so that they can't touch themselves and get themselves off by any other means than by him. This does not make them 'wimps', it means that the woman can't be trusted to let the man get her off himself and wants to try to do things herself at a faster pace. Now, if she truly did not want to be tied up and complained about that, then it could be considered rape and that WOULD be wrong, but some couples have sex while one of them are tied up; sometimes it's the man, sometimes it's the woman who is tied up. I have enjoyed the pleasures of both myself and I must say that there is a bit of excitement not knowing what my girlfriend would do next. It takes a lot of trust, but the anxiety is quite often a great way to add excitement knowing that you are helpless to do anything on your own.

As for the story itself, there was a lot of improperly used grammar and some words that were simply left out of the story. The story was still hot enough to keep the reader interested, assuming that they could get over their hatred of tied up women, but the errors did distract from the flow of the story. Sometimes spell check just isn't enough (there weren't many mispelled words, so it looked like spell check might have been used); you need a good editor who can suggest adding or changing words to make the story easier to read and understand. Don't be discouraged, I still gave you a 5 because the story was pretty good! Just ask someone to re-read the story so that you can catch the mistakes before you submit the story for posting. Thanks for the story though!

I don't comment much on stories but i did have to mention while the scenario was totally hot your grammar needs A LOT of work. Present tense, past tense, and words that have a double meaning. It just got me kind of confused a couple times. Distracting me which took away from the story itself. Not trying to be rude or anything just my opinion ....which I'm entitled to( i know some ass will have somethinh to say because I'm being honest). Anyway good start just get an editor. Good luck! :)

Goodness... had nothing to do with it, sweetie...