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Doing Dishes

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by goui02/19/09

*adds you to my favourites*

Great story. Its been so long since reading a butch/femme story I'd forgotten how good they are. Can't wait for more! X

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by Anonymous02/19/09

Too Short

Your story was too short. I find it best when there is some time given to character developement and some dialogue between the characters. I hope that my comments help and I'm looking forward toyour next installment.

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by Anonymous02/28/09

Steaming inside!!

Although the story is short, it surely is hot. Keep on writing!

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by Anonymous03/21/15

Great

Really hot.

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by Anonymous03/27/15

Wow

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by KumquatMay03/21/16

A woman knows.

The emotional intensity, the love & devotion between the characters, all was beaufully told with a few simple words. The imagery was potent. You chose your words well & thoughtfully, carefully, & your phrasing & rhythm is exquisite. Thanks for this lovely story. If I'm lucky to experience such love in my life I would know I was blessed.

Taylor

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by KumquatMay03/21/16

Steamy & lovely

I thought the sensual characterizations were clear. These two obviously love each other & are dying to be with each other after a prolonged absence. The crackling desire & maturity between the characters is evident by how well spoken they are even in thought.

Story was brilliant. Maybe not for your male readers, but since it was a woman loving her woman, it's not really something a man knows a damned thing about in the first place. You're an excellent writer. The phrasing & pace was perfect. The intent of the story was clear from the start. Love the characters & wouldwould love to get to know them. Really good work. Thank you.

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