All Comments on 'Family Camper Ch. 04'

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digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichabout 15 years ago
I'm still hoping Dave fucks Lucy

I hope it's getting close to when Dave seduces Lucy and fills her pussy with his cum. That's what I think is hot. Thanks ....Rich

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Not Much Here

I think you have the sex of your main character wrong. The dialogue of the female characters is entirely male. Instead of telling the story from the eyes of the daughter, you should try using the son or the father. Other than that, the story is just plain boring. Sorry.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
THATS A FINE PIECE OF WRITING

Love this story

peebeeandrollopeebeeandrolloover 7 years ago
Nice

This is a nice sensitive build up to what I hope will be a family four way

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Fantastic well written tastefully done and hot as hell. Looking forward to more of Family Camper. Thank you

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