by tktom
I hope it's getting close to when Dave seduces Lucy and fills her pussy with his cum. That's what I think is hot. Thanks ....Rich
I think you have the sex of your main character wrong. The dialogue of the female characters is entirely male. Instead of telling the story from the eyes of the daughter, you should try using the son or the father. Other than that, the story is just plain boring. Sorry.
This is a nice sensitive build up to what I hope will be a family four way
Fantastic well written tastefully done and hot as hell. Looking forward to more of Family Camper. Thank you