All Comments on 'Prom Date Ch. 03'

by Lez_writer

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fanfarefanfareover 9 years ago
Hmmm....

...well of course Mother always knows best. How can this possibly go wrong?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Maybe...

It would be cool if mom got a spin-off story

;)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Silly errors

You are far too prone to silly errors (such as getting your characters' names mixed up), poor grammar etc. I recommend that you get some books on writing and grammar and study them very carefully. That or find an editor.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Story Line issues..

You seriously need to look at your characters, because you are crossing them over, way to much.. Plus the Grammatical Errors are beyond anything I have seen.. Proof reading doesn't take long and having a second pair of eyes, probably would be a very good thing..

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