Rubbing More Than Elbows

Whoa!!

That story was downright dirty! I loved it!!

Hottt !!!

God Jen, that was so hot, please write more of the story.

MORE!

God.....so hot a daughter sucking her own Daddy's cock and tasting hs cum.......

too HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

wow that is hot would love too have that happen to me..I have had massages done by girl's my daughters age .. and wondered what it would be like ... please please keep this story going....

Beyond Hot!

This story is a new definition for the word HOT. It is a good story line and a wonderful opening for more chapters.
This is a good read!!!!

Superhot!!!

That was superhot with his daughter and her girlfriend. I like the way you wrote it and I can hardly wait for the next chapter.

tragic

its a shame that our language does not provide the words to adequately describe the qualities of this story.. . .
hot, great, arousing, erotic - they all fail to do this story justice.. . .
i'll have to settle for: thank you. and please write more.

Very enjoyable

Makes me want a massage!

Daddy' loving little slut

Loved it. I jacked off and that's all I need from incest. Other than some awkward sentences and grammer, this is a pretty well writen story. Good work!

So Believably Lovely

If ever a story rated beyond "Loved It", this was it. Granted, this is erotic fantasy, but I must say that you told my greatest fantasy (never would happen) in such a believable manner, that I wished it would continue. I hope it will too.

"Yummy, Hot Sauce..."

There is absolutely no correlation between your user name and the way you write. Can't be. But, if it's all the same to you, Do Not Ever let that scenario come(!) to fruition. Damn, damn, damn...Now that was Yummy, Hot Sauce! Is there a continuance in that hot and nasty mind of yours?

Looking forward to it...Time for another session...

Absotutely, fucking hot sauce. Yum.

I don't usually sign my name; but, 'blushingjen,' you earned it.

Outstanding work.

michael.

I was wanting him to fuck her

It would have been great if she straddled his hips and sat on his cock. Having her dad's cock fill her sweet pussy with cock and cum. Thanks for the great story....Rich

WOW!!

What an awesome story. You MUST continue this one, please????S

Unexpected!

Another great story. I preferred your first but don't take that as a criticism. Still very, very good!

Twists and Turns and HOT Action

The premise was so good that it would have been a great story off that but having it turn out to be her father was a stroke of genius!! A hot, amazing story that I hope includes future chapters!!

Very hot!

I loved this! Very well done!
Keep up the great work!

I NEED TO MAKE AN APPOINTMENT

WHAT A GREAT SEXY AND AROUSING STORY, LIKED IT A LOT. NOW ABOUT THAT APPOINTENT? SERIOUSLY KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK

Extremely Hot!

This was a wonderfully sexy story, with just enough realism to make take it from hot to sizzling.

A great twist

I loved it. A great twist to a good story. Looking forward to the return visit.

Fantastic

Would love to read the follow up, with little Jenny making good on her promise to her Daddy .....

I agree

With all the above comments just had to add that i wish you were my daughter

So fuckin hot

I hope there's another chapter, without Susan.

Very nice

An original idea (at least it's new to me) very well presented. I too would like to see another chapter where they go a bit further but I think Susan needs to be there. Keeping the secret between father/daughter while doing it in front of another presone adds to the taboo and makes it more believable.

Good Start

A very good start. Short, sweet and to the point. Yummy cummy swap. ;) Definitely need too be continued if not by blushingjen, than by someone.

Nice surprise

That's what I call turning an awkward situation into an award-winning situation for all involved.

A weird story, but I liked it. Could have an aftermath.

Needs more

This just begs for part 2
Jean