All Comments on 'Brother and Sister'

by orvette1

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digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichabout 15 years ago
a good story, and seemed like he was telling it

The story might have had a few grammar mistakes in it , but while reading the work, I felt as if the guy was standing beside me telling the story verbatim. It may have not been in perfect English,but when you are reading that someone is sucking his sisters cunt, does it make enough difference to distract from the story? Good Job and hope that you will continue with the hot story.Thanks .....Rich

oldwayneoldwaynealmost 15 years ago
I ALMOST ALWAYS AGREE WITH RICH...

Today is no exception. I enjoyed your little bro/sis incest tale. I hope to see more of your submissions.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
excitement

great article it was like you the writer it happened to you everyone should at least have a chance to experience once in their lives thanks .

johnnyforeignerjohnnyforeignerover 13 years ago
lovely

Have never read A2M here before & enojyed it immensely!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
hmmmm?

That was boring.... nothing existing happened....

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Damn. That escalated quickly

JJMemaw0623JJMemaw0623about 4 years ago
Um . .

Not enough story or backstory to completely understand their relationship and why they suddenly became lovers. Please keep writing.

davebccanadadavebccanadaover 2 years ago

I must say it did have passion! or rather Passion with a capital P! You do need to smooth it out a bit with boring background but do keep the passion.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Story is good I’m surprised how many times some people cum in stories shame it’s not that easy in reality

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