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So predictable.
It has gone exactly where most readers thought it was going to go or wanted it to go. You could at least of made it a bit different. Let me guess in the morning they both end up in hot tub in a group swap while being filmed. but it's okay they still love each other. Are they ever going to tell the family what they have been doing? Perhaps when or if they get home they should get the slides out and let their parents see what they did on holiday? As before stupid people do stupid things and this couple like most swingers are stupid people. But hey all the swingers on this site will love this story.
I so want to see Debbie get gang bang
Debbie's husband should have to watch her get gang fucked for the whole day while he just watches her. All he can do is jack off . That's what I think would be hot.Thanks ....Rich
Fucked Up.
Not very realistic, I didn't find it erotic, most sane couples would have been on a plane home, but it's your fantasy so go ahead and fuck them up.
Never mind the limp dicked assholes who
knock your story. It's a good story and you are a good writer. Keep adding chapters it's a good read.
You must be a limped dick person.
After all you have no name. And you agree with what they are doing so that makes you either a cuck or a wimp or a swinger or perhaps all three. And yes it is a rubbish story been done before much better than this one.
Folks chill out its fantasy
Yes we've read similar, yes we all know where's its going, but its a fantasy, an escape. If you don't like it you don't read it, simple.
Keep the story going, its written well and I for one am enjoying it.
Well done.
This Is A Fantasy
The ugly-mouthed moralists should go to another site or go out and play in traffic. This is fantasy. I am enjoying it but hope that there will be some interesting plot twists and more erotic descriptions. Now just having the guy jack off while his wife gets gang-banged is not fair to the character. Author, let him have his dick in a nice feminine warm place. Let's see how imaginative the author is.
Fun read
Of course it is similar to others. I especially like the limp dick, cuck and swingers mixed onto one category. Too bad you don't know what you are missing. Guarantee swingers are not "limp dicks"or cucks, but if you've never tried it, then go ahead and knock it. Your like a lot of other idiots.
You would want to be a cuck,wimp,swinger?
Your as sick as the writer of this story. I hav eno wish to see my wife fuck someone else and have it recorded and used to blackmail us later on.
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