Desiring Another Man's Wife Ch. 02

Your Bl;ack

Writing about a stupid white guy, I don't find that anything but insulting. Put your bullshit in interracial, cause it's just tired out one trick pony black fantasy and there isn't any white husbands that want to trade women, so fuck you.

SOOOOOOOOOO SAD!

Writer needs to put this BS in Interraacial -where it belongs --Just another sad& sick episode !

I agree with the person below

Can't you write about something different? You can write so why not use you ability to write a different type of story. al your stoires are the same and as the person below said it is becoming boring. and you are turning into a one trick pony.

Great story!

I wish we, [my wife and I] could be lucky enough to be included in someone's open marriage plans. Help my wife!

Very erotic!

Color has nothing to do with the story thus far. There is no need to focus on that. This is an erotic story on an erotic site. That makes sense. Why are we reading stories here if not because they are erotic and often about forbidden things?

Hot Story

Great story can't wait for the next episode.

He doesn't realize that he's giving his wife away

His wife has had the hots for Victor since they first met. Now that she has had him, had his cock in her pussy, will her husband be able to satisfy her. I hope when she goes to bed that night with her husband, she still has her pussy full of Victor's cum, and she asks her husband to go down on her. She gives her husband a cream pie surprise, and he likes it.Thanks, I'm not really into interracial,but the story is good. ....Rich

color dont matter

all i have to say is.......... more more more

Knees on each side of your legs?

I thought that Monique was sitting on your lap with both knees on each side of your legs, but now she is "on her knees"? Which is it?
And Jen is off the Pill, so does Monique's hubby shoot her pussy full of his babymakers and knock her up with his niggah baby?

Can't waitfor "all" the other chapters to follow!!

All I say is good job,keep it up.For those that only want to critize and slam this story.For godsakes go friggin read something else.Yes Jen is probably getting pounded by a big black dick and enjoying it.Whatin the hell do you think her husbands doing?Getting ready to pound his wife also.So it seems pretty mutual doncha think?Your on an erotica site or did you forget.Bottom line,You don't like the storyline,don't friggin read it.Pretty simple.
xleglover keep up the good work.Look forward to your other chapters.

Cowboy

boring

same old story again, and again on purpose missplaced so at least some people start reading it. a shame you waste your talent.

Great story

Bravo Xleglover, thank you for the giving us the delicious fantasy about Jen in the endless daily depressing economic news.

Erotic story- contemptible husband

Erotic story, with letcher husband so hot for monique that he leaves his wife to the merciless lust of Victor. Self centered. selfish bastard.
the Ct. Yankee

SICKO

From the time you started on another pure bull-shit tale--You have given every body a reason to give you all this shit --You deserve it --You have talent --but misuse it -
What a waste & shame!! Change the theme of your stories --I am not a racist --but you tend to over do it !!ARE YOU suffering from depression -or just plain ill???-Either way-- get on with your life -or end it -

Robotic sex...

...at jet speed. Add some feelings and emotions to the sex acts...let the characters enjoy their illicit passions.

I like it

I like it. Don't let the detractors get you down. I hope you write more soon as I'm anxious to see how this developes.

Looks like

Jen baby has the hots for Victor. Hubby can't see it because he has the hots himself. Got a feeling hubby won't like the outcome of this episode, may have taken on more than he wanted to chew. Jen baby most likely will be baking something in her oven, a chocolate cake with white frosting. Although in the wrong genre section, this story is entertaining.

Great

I loved it.
Keep it going. Don't listen to the dumped ex-wives.

There is no point reading the rest of this story

We all know that the husband is going to be some sick cuckold wimp who gets off watching his wife get better sex than he could ever give her. The Black man will have a huge twenty inch dick by 6 inchs wide and the wife will take it all in her tight cunt. So tight because the husbands dick is too small for her. Then The husband will suck the wife's cum off the Black mans dick and then suck cum out of the wife's sloppy cunt. Then by chapter 30 they will end up in a slave sweat shop/whore house in mexico.

There I have written the story for you.

Pretty Good Story

For all the Any Mouse posters that piss, moan, and whine that the porn you are reading does not come up to your high moral standards, why are you on a porn site in the first place? You high moral ignorant mother fuckers are in the wrong place.

As for me the issue of black on white or vice versa makes no difference. It is just two people fucking or getting ready to fuck. No more erotic then two black or two white folks fucking. Whether it is 2,4 or 22 people is nether adds or detracts from the story if it is well written.

I whould like to see something from Jen's point of view. I hope the author has a chapter on that subject.

I am enjoying the suspence so far. Thanks

Mike S.

Jen off birth control

So are you going to become a daddy to Victor's fucking of your wife, with Jen off birth control? Maybe Monique also needs to have some seeds planted in her as well, to grow a basketball in her tummy?

PG-13

not very explicit. Had great potential, but fell short

I can picture Monique in my mind. I too love beautiful, sexy, dark-haired women, just as you described her. The real bonus though is she's a tease, and likes to tease with her legs and feet in stockings.

I'm a leg man who prefer women in either stockings or pantyhose, and tall high heel shoes. I can't wait to read the rest of the story later. First two chapters have me horny as hell!

Thanks for sharing your fantasy, and mine. Have a great day!

Bye Bye Innocence

There isn't the slightest evidence that the petite white wife has the hots for the big black buck. But her moron, lingerie-fetishist, bumbling husband gave her over to be titillated in the first part of the story and she has simply gone along with the plan. This wouldn't have happened on its own. No, Mr. dipshit panty sniffer is dragging his marriage in the shitter.

You have to be one limp dick and completely unimaginative sissy to let the steam go out of your marriage when you're not even thirty years old. For chrissakes, it's unconscionable. This is the author's shortcoming here, expecting us to buy this. Pantyman and his wife should be portrayed as older with some other extenuating circumstances to make this fly.

It's a rather breezy stroll through the front door and straight into the kitchen in two minutes flat to have the mousey white wife doing the watusi on Tyrese's horse meat, ain't it? Sorry, Victor, was it?

Not to kick a dead horse, but any able bodied man who can't keep himself and his wife hot and interested has a real problem and needs to check the angle of his wrists.

All this bullshit about the spark or passion waning in your marriage is really just your lack of attention, poorly cultivated imagination, and other various forms of capitulation. That is the truth of it right there.

Anyway, the author definitely has a way with words and is spinning this yarn with noticeable aplomb. I will hang for now, but if hubby eats the creampie then I'm gonna get my hat.

ps And why in TF do people think they're any better or braver because they have a blue name billy123 instead of anonymous? Put your name, address, and telephone number as your name or stfu.