Fantastic story, honest, touching, beautiful, beautifully kinky, and oh so erotic. Loved it, waiting for more about this beautiful, loving, unusual family.
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Anonymous02/24/09
No Pedos Please
"She has the body of a young girl. When you made love to her it was like fucking a thirteen year old. That turned you on, didn't it"
This has to be one of the hottest stories I have ever read. The emotional content is out of sight. The writing is wonderful. It is HOT!!! This should be a must read for anyone who enjoys incest stories.
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Anonymous02/24/09
How about a Little more?
This was a great story that begs to be continued as Little and family continue to discover each other.
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Anonymous02/24/09
Delicious perversion
Sooo sexy, and I loved that the characters cared so much for one another, taking their feelings into consideration.
Absolutely did. Well written and usually I'd feel cheated by the lack of real relation, but your talent made up for it. You have been favourited chunks.
Great, great story Chunks. Well written and VERY hot. I wished it had gone on a little longer, as I REALLY wanted to 'see' that threesome between little, Jessie and Mike.
Hopefully you'll write more about them. :)
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Anonymous08/10/09
loved it
the story was Hot very well done in all aspects keep it up
Read my profile and you will see I have a "thing" for very petite women. My own daughter is just over 4'11". The guilt thing is a bitch isn't it? And it IS a bitch! This story should be serialized. Seriously...Nice...
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Anonymous09/29/10
excellent
Hey, well done. First rate. I have no comments aside from expressing my admiration for your skill.
This the second story I read for after "Making Out With Mom". Your style is so realistic. You always make things happen spontaneously and natural. Keep the excellent work.
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Anonymous07/04/11
Beautiful
That was so nice, I couldn't cum and I almost couldn't stay hard (the usual scenario for me at Literotica). In fact, I felt like I was intruding on a beautiful (and developing) love story. I'm envious and wish I had something similar to share and enjoy.
I don't know about any other readers, but after awhile the stories seem the same, then I need to look for a different kind of story. A few are really good as a story. This story is fantastic for erotica. It excited me, and had me so wet. I wanted the same thing done to me. Then at the last when she came in and helped them both. I had to go and find my vibrator..thank you!
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Anonymous08/09/12
oh god
dammit i came right when she said " oh god mike. fuck me FUCK ME HARDER!"
I enjoyed the story. If that is all there is, I am ok. If you decide to continue with another chapter or more, most of us would love it. Either way continue to write.
Thanks.
Absolutely perrrrrfect! It's been a WEEK since I've read a story on here that actually had me smiling when I finished it, and there were several that were either so bad that I couldn't finish them or just annoying.
This story had a lot of my favorite components. Started out with the guy's name, since my name is Mike it played RIGHT into my head! Sometimes if I find a *really* hot story I'll copy it to a text file so I can change the guys name to mine to make it rock for me ;)
..then there is the girl, I've never liked big tits, they do nothing for me. ...but give me a handfull with nice poky nipples and its on! ...and you cant go wrong with a shaved girl ;). Love really short girls, narrow hips and juuust enough butt to grab on to, too much just gets in the way! Hehe
...anyway rocking writing! Keep up the good work and I hope you enjoyed writing it as much as I did reading it!
Loved the story and characters. I especially like petite girls/ladies with small perky tits. Lets get on with the story with some girl/girl action and back to their kinky life style.
Come on now... exactly WHAT was there not to love about this story...?
Because it was great... There were things that he said and did that felt more real than most anything I've read here before... his conflicted reactions were so true to life... and her behavior as she learned each new thing and how it was better than what she'd previously thought was the best she could feel...
Amazing.
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Anonymous08/26/14
I'd really enjoy reading more about their growing relationship and how Jessie becomes their "Little girl".
Do so enjoy stories that involve more petitie/tiny girls. They just don't get the credit they deserve
Great read.
Well I loved the story, and absolutely adored Little! The dad though was annoying as hell, you just wanted to throttle him every couple of paragraphs!! Lol.
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Anonymous01/08/16
Hot and Sweet!
Wow. So many hot and sweet details Very emotional, beautifully written, very sexy. Thank you!
it's not realistic or believable. But when I read it, I believe. This is without question, your most erotic story to date. It is the most erotic story I've read on this site and that's a whole lot! Damn! I can't express how beautifully erotic this story is. When you let yourself go, damn but you can write!
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Anonymous07/12/16
mmmmmm
nice . . . very nice . . . pass me a kleenex, uh, yea, uh . . . hey - Thank you that was hot!
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Anonymous11/28/16
Hot!
Very well done. Great sex and great emotions. I really liked the ending.
Your story was so vivid I felt like I was right there smelling the scents and feeling the heat. I like that you left the ending as you did, it's inspired me to fantasize about where the story went from there. ♡♡♡♡
English
Wow
Fantastic story, honest, touching, beautiful, beautifully kinky, and oh so erotic. Loved it, waiting for more about this beautiful, loving, unusual family.
No Pedos Please
"She has the body of a young girl. When you made love to her it was like fucking a thirteen year old. That turned you on, didn't it"
Are you fucking kidding me...
Wow
This has to be one of the hottest stories I have ever read. The emotional content is out of sight. The writing is wonderful. It is HOT!!! This should be a must read for anyone who enjoys incest stories.
How about a Little more?
This was a great story that begs to be continued as Little and family continue to discover each other.
Delicious perversion
Sooo sexy, and I loved that the characters cared so much for one another, taking their feelings into consideration.
Loved it.
Absolutely did. Well written and usually I'd feel cheated by the lack of real relation, but your talent made up for it. You have been favourited chunks.
Fantastic
Great, great story Chunks. Well written and VERY hot. I wished it had gone on a little longer, as I REALLY wanted to 'see' that threesome between little, Jessie and Mike.
Hopefully you'll write more about them. :)
loved it
the story was Hot very well done in all aspects keep it up
Fantastic!!!!!!!!!
You need to continue this great story. It is very well written with a fantastic story line.
My fetish
Read my profile and you will see I have a "thing" for very petite women. My own daughter is just over 4'11". The guilt thing is a bitch isn't it? And it IS a bitch! This story should be serialized. Seriously...Nice...
excellent
Hey, well done. First rate. I have no comments aside from expressing my admiration for your skill.
So fluid so well made.
This the second story I read for after "Making Out With Mom". Your style is so realistic. You always make things happen spontaneously and natural. Keep the excellent work.
Beautiful
That was so nice, I couldn't cum and I almost couldn't stay hard (the usual scenario for me at Literotica). In fact, I felt like I was intruding on a beautiful (and developing) love story. I'm envious and wish I had something similar to share and enjoy.
NICE
WOW IT DID PLAY OUT AS A TRUE EVENT
I Can't Believe This
I don't know about any other readers, but after awhile the stories seem the same, then I need to look for a different kind of story. A few are really good as a story. This story is fantastic for erotica. It excited me, and had me so wet. I wanted the same thing done to me. Then at the last when she came in and helped them both. I had to go and find my vibrator..thank you!
oh god
dammit i came right when she said " oh god mike. fuck me FUCK ME HARDER!"
LOVE THIS STORY
GREAT STORY!!!!!
Follow-Up
How does the Threesome work oput does Little get Pregnant does that cause jessie to get Jealous or act as the GrandMother.
The FUCK ME DADDY..... I almost started to cum right then! Great story.
wow
This storiy was absolutely perfect, the build up made for such a great "climax" in more ways than one!
great
hopefully there is a part 2 little and mommy sounds yummy
more
I would love to read more of the little Jessie story
very well written
I enjoyed the story. If that is all there is, I am ok. If you decide to continue with another chapter or more, most of us would love it. Either way continue to write.
Thanks.
Kudos!
Brilliantly written. Instant fave.
Awesome!
Absolutely perrrrrfect! It's been a WEEK since I've read a story on here that actually had me smiling when I finished it, and there were several that were either so bad that I couldn't finish them or just annoying.
This story had a lot of my favorite components. Started out with the guy's name, since my name is Mike it played RIGHT into my head! Sometimes if I find a *really* hot story I'll copy it to a text file so I can change the guys name to mine to make it rock for me ;)
..then there is the girl, I've never liked big tits, they do nothing for me. ...but give me a handfull with nice poky nipples and its on! ...and you cant go wrong with a shaved girl ;). Love really short girls, narrow hips and juuust enough butt to grab on to, too much just gets in the way! Hehe
...anyway rocking writing! Keep up the good work and I hope you enjoyed writing it as much as I did reading it!
It just doesn't get much better than this.
Loved the story and characters. I especially like petite girls/ladies with small perky tits. Lets get on with the story with some girl/girl action and back to their kinky life style.
Come on now... exactly WHAT was there not to love about this story...?
Because it was great... There were things that he said and did that felt more real than most anything I've read here before... his conflicted reactions were so true to life... and her behavior as she learned each new thing and how it was better than what she'd previously thought was the best she could feel...
Amazing.
I'd really enjoy reading more about their growing relationship and how Jessie becomes their "Little girl".
Do so enjoy stories that involve more petitie/tiny girls. They just don't get the credit they deserve
Great read.
Thanks
I think that covers it all
JUST ONE BIG THANKS
Couldn't love this more!
I love this story on so many levels! Thank you for everything!
Ok but not realistic or believable.
Lovely story
Plain and simply lovely. Sexy, and with a nice conclusion.
Well I loved the story, and absolutely adored Little! The dad though was annoying as hell, you just wanted to throttle him every couple of paragraphs!! Lol.
Hot and Sweet!
Wow. So many hot and sweet details Very emotional, beautifully written, very sexy. Thank you!
Ok, so
it's not realistic or believable. But when I read it, I believe. This is without question, your most erotic story to date. It is the most erotic story I've read on this site and that's a whole lot! Damn! I can't express how beautifully erotic this story is. When you let yourself go, damn but you can write!
mmmmmm
nice . . . very nice . . . pass me a kleenex, uh, yea, uh . . . hey - Thank you that was hot!
Hot!
Very well done. Great sex and great emotions. I really liked the ending.
very erotic
Your story was so vivid I felt like I was right there smelling the scents and feeling the heat. I like that you left the ending as you did, it's inspired me to fantasize about where the story went from there. ♡♡♡♡
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