All Comments on 'Sleeping Slut'

because there isn't much realism to this story. No way can one insert a cock down her throat without her awakening instantly. Also were is the non-consent. She was more than willing to do his bidding. One doesn't fall asleep after a rape. Enough said.

Not to shabby! Keep up the good work.

The story needs to describe the characters more,the erotic action was explained good, but the characters didn't seem real.Maybe if the last line would have been, "Thanks Mom", it would have been more believeably. Thanks for the post....Rich

Super hot! Do not listen to the other feedback- this story gets me off every time. Love it!

it was good, but you should have had more to the story, made it longer kinkier ;)