All Comments on 'Voices so Sweet'

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bflagsstbflagsstabout 15 years ago
this poem definitely works as spoken

I wouldn't have liked it as much had I just read it. Good work.

TzaraTzaraabout 15 years ago
I think this is a particularly good rondeau.

It's a difficult form because it requires a kind of simplicity of observation that avoids being cloying. I think you've done this very well, just reading it. Your narration only makes it better. I quite liked it.

annaswirlsannaswirlsabout 15 years ago
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Just wanted to say "How lovely" and Congratulations!

GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasureabout 15 years ago
Lovely!

I just got my sound card re-installed and I found this, it is a real treat.

Tess

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