Roxanne's Initiation

Very good

Good story of brother and sister sex..........but in todays world..........., she should be on birth control,no REASON to get pregnant...........don't ruin this story

all ready ruined

the writer all ready ruined it with "dickhead" not caring enough about his sister to pull out before he came. so much for the "macho" bullshit. he comes across as a self centered jerk.

it was good

until you had the brother start calling his sister a slut.

Could have been good

Would have been a good story if you left out the “slut” talk and not using protection.

I really like it

I really like this story, even more if she shouldn't be in birth control; the brother must cums in sister's pussy, the sister should be his factual wife, she really wants brother's seed inside her womb, even if this is a real risk. This is a story, not life. I wanna read more and more!

Hot

'Let your big brother show you how to fuck.' Yowza, that's hot as hell. Mmmmm...all the other stuff those people are bitching about is trivial...this is a fictional story. The whole fucking scenario would never happen anyway and THOSE are the details they pick out to complain about? Give me a break! I hardly think this is the forum to look for reality.

Excellent

Loved this story, disregard what the nay sayers think. Please continue writing this story & post the next chapter soon.

awesome

It was really good, but too short

OMG

Please write more, and vocabulary

Awesome

THAT WAS AMAZING I GOT REALLY TURNED ON WHEN HER BROTHER CALLED HER A SLIT,MADE HER BEG FOR HIS COCK AND CUM INSIDE HER THIS STORY IS FUCKING HOT!

Momma

Where was the parents? They were in the house earlier. This story was not a well thought out story. Maybe that is the way the author wanted it. I don't have any sisters so I wouldn't know.

i loved it when he said " shut up slut, i will cum where i want". so hot...

One more 'shaved' brain ..
We already know he can not anything normal about sex .. He started with "shaved" and the handle hair brush ..
- Another pimply teenager-deviant.

roxannie

needs to be longer