All Comments on 'The Order Ch. 11'

Please hurry with next chapter.. Really enjoyed it.. Wished it was a little longer tho

although it was too short, can't wait to find out what happens next and i hope nadia comes around soon, she loves him so she needs to get over it so they can help her better.

This one definitely garnered an award for clever writing. Great chapter and a long awaited one. Great job there Purefire! Love the way our little human is fighting her feelings for our hero Drae. They two sure have the sparks for each other. Can't wait for the next chapter. You da girl!

but sweet.

After two weeks! YAY! Thanks for updating(: If I may suggest, can we have some sex in the next chapter? Something intense, maybe a couple of MS pages long? It feels like they have a lot of patching up to do, but I wouldn't mind if Andrae takes a little advantage of Nadia. Maybe when she's sleeping? I know I sound desperate... but... Sigh.Though, I do hope there's sex scene in the next chapt.

Good writing, as always, though I spotted a few errors. But they don't matter when the plot is so good(:

Loving it! <3 L, KR.

more more more!

Fantastic!

The ending was very sweet and I can't wait to read what happens next. Andrae and Nadia have such a cute love-hate relationship.