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Desiring Another Man's Wife Ch. 03

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by Anonymous

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by StudStory02/26/09

Great job

I love your work. You seem to like stockings a lot!

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by Anonymous02/26/09

Yes, okay we get the picture.

Jen is a slave to the black mans huge cock. The white husband is slave to the black mans wife. Jen feels guilty-NOT- Husband feels guilty-NOT- boring old same old story line.

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by Anonymous02/26/09

Same Ole Same O

You are one sick dude -with a death wish mentality ---why not put this trash in interracial??

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by Anonymous02/26/09

I loved it !!!!!

What the fuck is with all of these assholes!! Why are they even at this website reading REAL Erotica. What the fuck are they looking for, A Pulitzer Prize winning novel??? I come here to read sexy stimulating stories and that is exactly what this is. Don't let these fucking no nothing critics get you down. Keep up the great writing and fuck those fairy stories readers, and I do mean FAIRIES!!

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by Anonymous02/26/09

Keep it going

I like the variation from many stories here can't wait to see where you take it.

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by ryu7702/26/09

I like this one....

I hate that his lust for Monique is clouding his mind, but at least he is jealous about his wife Jen. I bet while this dude is fucking her, his wife is bent over her desk getting fucked by Victor. I like this,I wonder what this couple's ultimate motive is?

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by Anonymous02/26/09

playing...

Playing at Work is Dangerous = Second Thoughts = Desiring Another Man's Wife = nothing else to say ?

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by Anonymous02/26/09

Boo!

Went down that road, stupid husband, stupid wife, stupid interracial story.

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by Anonymous02/26/09

Boo...Boo too

"Hey little white man...once she had this big ole black cock of mine....yatayatayata...So fuking what. I'm surprised the honkeys never got passed the smell. nigger cock and cunt both stink and these two were no example of the white race...

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by Anonymous02/26/09

Good

writing! I really don't care for the story content. They're all sick....

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by Simple49er02/26/09

Wife gives other man

what she does not give him. She tries more for the other man than she tries for him. This marriage is over. Neither knows it yet, but I assume the next installment will have the husband realize that she does not love him anymore. She has never dressed or behaved as sexually with him. She has never tried like this for him. Sign post up ahead read DIVORCE.

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by Anonymous02/27/09

Pure trash

Whats to like about this this piece of garbage. Same old shit.

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by Anonymous02/27/09

Good Story!

I like the way you are bringing this story along. He is torn between stopping this arrangement and his lust. I'm anxious to see how you develop this very well written story.

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by Anonymous02/27/09

Disagree with Simple49er

I don't agree with Simple49ers assessment . Initially hussband lussted so much for Monique that he ignored his wife while Monique's husband seduced or raped Jen. Iif you remember while he was pawing Monique, he heard Jen cry out and was going to help her til Monique stopped him. After that Jen said screw it and became as adulterous as he was.I think Jen is going to leave him high and dry in the end.
the Ct. Yankee

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by Anonymous02/27/09

Slow it down a little

The first installment started out great. Then, they've already had sex in the second installment - where can you go from there? Would like to at least see the seduction of her in the second chapter. You gave a first person account of him and Monique, why not give a first person account of her and victor in the kitchen?

Honestly, I'd like to see ch 2 & 3 rewritten to further develop the characters and their feelings/lust/guilt/resentment for their partner's willingness to share.

I loved the "playing at work" series, and I know you can further develop this series to be one of my all time favorites as well!

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by Anonymous02/27/09

Birth Control?

Perhaps Victor was lying about his birth control and you are taking it as if he was telling the truth. In future chapters Jen needs to get pregnant with a half-Niggah baby, along with Monique and your half-blooded bastard, so all of you can get expertise in diaper changing.

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by StudStory03/04/09

great

I'm looking forward to the 4th part

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by don8765404/18/09

Jen's Chocolate milk

Jen needs to get pregnant so the baby can have chocolate milk. And then the baby can grow up to be like Obama....

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by mottfan06/26/15

Xleglover,
I have toyed with the idea of writing an erotic story and submitting it to this site. No need to now because my story would have been very similar to your "Desiring Another Man's Wife" series. It's almost like you have read my mind.

A number of years ago I met a beautiful young woman who had the most amazing legs. We worked together and she sat across from me in our office. (Our cubicles were back-to-back, facing one another). Over time she caught me checking out her legs several times. I couldn't believe it when she told me she was flattered I was checking out her body.

I admitted to her my little fetish was seeing women in tan or flesh colored pantyhose. After that she wore pantyhose (or stockings) almost every day. Before long she began giving me "private leg shows". It started with her crossing and uncrossing her legs while I watched.

Shortly after that she began slipping off her high heels and rubbing her feet seductively. I kept imagining rubbing my cock and cumming all over her sexy soles, drenching the silky hose. Eventually the biggest treat yet...she would give me awesome upskirt shots. I am not making any of this up, I swear.

She would describe to me in detail how much exposing herself to me made her pussy sopping wet. Turns out her sexual fantasy had always been to do something like this, but had been afraid to do it in public to a stranger for safety reasons.

I was in heaven to say the least. Six months after meeting her we began dating while falling in love with one another. Of course we were the subject of gossip among our co-workers.

15 years later we are still madly in love and happily married. She is the most erotic woman I have ever met. The sex is amazing, and she still gets off wearing crotchless pantyhose and 4" heels in bed while fucking my brains out.

(I didn't have time to reread this note so I apologize for any errors).

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