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This guys a DREAMER.....
It seemed like an interesting story until it got down to the name-calling (slut)....etc....and his doing her girlfriends....and the way he put her down was pathetic. I can only suggest that he is probably lacking in the action AND penis departments and has chosen to let his imagination take over....LOL!!!!!
I dont like calling girls I have sex with names
You called the girl a ginger, does that mean redheaded or is it some slang for something else? So she is pregnant and you fooled her, now for years you can pay child support to her. Yes fucking her classmates would be easy, she would, as long as she trusted you, bring them over to use your water bath. You dont ace the SATs to become a hair dresser. And rocket scientist dont usually run around in bikinis and letting guys fuck them bareback. By the way if this was you, she was fucking around, you may want to go get medically tested.
She was not too smart....
She is going to be a Mommy, but she ain't too smart. Maybe you will have to learn how to change diapers.
Good stuff
As a fellow female with impregnation fantasies, I say good work. I've read all your stories so far and they are all pretty good.
If you want to avoid the naysayers, start with a warning. Start by warning them that it is fiction, and may not be all that realistic, that you don't condone unsafe sex in real life, warn if there are any non-consensual aspects, etc.
I do hope you broaden your main characters a little; like tricking the female characters into getting pregnant without getting them drunk/tipsy first, maybe the female getting accidentally pregnant from a guy she's in a relationship with, maybe the females tricking a guy into making them pregnant, etc.
Her girlfriends
Were her girlfriends' cycles off, too? The makings of a commune are here.... With one guy and several "Mommies"...
irregular
Maybe you created another to be the Queen's subjects?
i liked it,especially about breeding a dumb slut. keep writing!
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