...a great trusting relationship, they are used to socializing, comfortable with eachother and all of a sudden she has sneaked away to a hosts bathroom in the back of the house and is blowing the guy. You're a good writer, you described hubby's dilema and feelings very well and then...he is now a wimp and a cuck?
A straight guy to a wimp in 30 seconds? More like a husband in denial, loving his wife, trusting her, believing in her and then the shock and trauma of her infidelity...gut retching hurt! No one wants to lose the one they love but, I would ask you to write another chapter and know, most readers would agree that this sudden display of wanton sex (on her knees sucking another guys cock) more than suggests that she is into random sex, adultery and the forbidden fruits and further that she is quite comfortable with it and...obviously enjoys the thrill of dangerously exploiting her cheating! Chapter 2?????
You are good so don't stop writing stories!
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...a great trusting relationship, they are used to socializing, comfortable with eachother and all of a sudden she has sneaked away to a hosts bathroom in the back of the house and is blowing the guy. You're a good writer, you described hubby's dilema and feelings very well and then...he is now a wimp and a cuck?
A straight guy to a wimp in 30 seconds? More like a husband in denial, loving his wife, trusting her, believing in her and then the shock and trauma of her infidelity...gut retching hurt! No one wants to lose the one they love but, I would ask you to write another chapter and know, most readers would agree that this sudden display of wanton sex (on her knees sucking another guys cock) more than suggests that she is into random sex, adultery and the forbidden fruits and further that she is quite comfortable with it and...obviously enjoys the thrill of dangerously exploiting her cheating! Chapter 2?????
You are good so don't stop writing stories!
Your sick!
Your a sick fuck please stop writing!
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