by STEPHENA
In future chapters and in other stories, dump the UKism's and shorthand words used only there as many readers from distant locations become confused by them. Also several have no translations to known items outside the UK and a couple other places.
Loved this. Roll on chapter 2!
Don't take any notice of the earlier comments about "UKisms" - it makes it much more readable. God knows there's enough cr*p here that's full of "USisms"....
I liked the story and don't worry about the negative comments about the UK's ism from the anonymous writers. If you read enough of the stories in the site you learn what they mean and how to understand them. I can hardly wait for the next chapter between Stephen and Emma.