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Liked It!
Well written (as always) and nice buildup to the end. I especially liked the interesting plot twist - made for a much better story!
A Great Trip
Hi MF,
Just wanted to say how much I enjoyed "Bus Ride". As a bus commuter there have been many times I have fantacized about such things and the twist at the end brought a smile to my face, you see my father was a city bus driver!
On the topic of another recent story, "MILF", I read the comments at the end and can see why people said what they did. I was sort of expecting the second chapter to be from Steve's point of view - that could have been interesting.
Anyway, as a long time fan I enjoy your stories and always look for recent posts.
Thanks for sharing, Jerry
PS: I see you have shut down your old email address and given some of the comments I've read I might understand why. Keep on writing for those of us who appreciate a good yard with some good sex!
wonderful fantasy
Thanks again MF. I have been taking the bus everyday now too for economic reasons, so this story was very timely. Unfortunately in China, buses are always way to crowded, thought the eye candy is nice.. but should that happen... oh my!! Love your customary twist in the end to. Superbly crafted and highly erotic.
very hot.
This story was great! I loved the whole sneaky theme it had!
Omg
Now that was a great ending, out of the blue and different.
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