All Comments on 'Even through the halogen (a cento)'

by annaswirls

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Epmd607Epmd607about 15 years ago
I thought I detected lebroz...

but it was bill dada. I read a poem by bill dada last week and someone mentioned "Dada-less" in the comments and that's where I wrote my own poem from. Good use of 'I worry about us', makes me want to write my own 'I worry about us'. -sd

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 15 years ago
Holy Crap!

somebody reads my stuff? somebody has the talent to fit my lines in? Seriously, well put together and you made it yours. Although I would have changed #14 to remember, number being too quirky here.

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