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Lunch Break

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/04/09

Great Lunch

Beautiful voice telling realistic story with proper sounds making me want to have lunch with you. What can we do during morning and afternoon breaks? Very well told story. Loved it. You got it right.

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by Anonymous03/04/09

So sexy

My monitor has melted. Great story, wonderful sound effects, and oh, such a hot delivery! It was good for me too -

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by Anonymous03/04/09

Best yet

This is the best story I've heard yet on this site. Please make more!

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by Anonymous03/06/09

Very Hot

Oh your voice is so sexy. Please submit more stories like this and yes the kinkier the better. You made me hard while listening and had to pull my cock until I set cum splattering everywhere.
Only wish it was me fucking you and making you cum.
Looking forward to more of your voice.

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by Dr_Impervious03/24/09

Wonderful Performance!

Engaging and creative. Loved the sound effects, the music made me giggle a little which added to the fun I had listening to this piece. Succinct and successful, a wonderful combination... Let's hear more!

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by Anonymous07/27/09

MORE!

Absolutely the best one i have heard here, the "mine" series comes close, but this definatly tops it. I came right when i was supposed to. Your voice, effects story, and timing are perfect. Please do more.

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by Anonymous08/08/09

Very cool

Very cool

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by MRDeany01/13/10

WHAT A SEXY,

SEXY VOICE! And a great delivery, well paced and with real emotion. More please!!

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by BiBigirl06/18/10

EXCELLENT

"Lunch Break" is a very descriptive, erotic audio and your voice is very HOT and sexy!

BiBiGirl (Amber)

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by Anonymous09/19/10

Yeah for quaility work!

Nice job! I liked the voice, I liked the effects, acting is great… maybe the pacing could have been stretched out a bit. Like you're making it as short for the simple reason of getting through it. Like the difference between really wanting to fuck for as long as you can, as deliciously as you can, or smile, usher in, take the cash and go "Oooh, aaaah! on queue, and minded the time and a good margin of customer care to expenditure.

Check out AsianPrincess's delivery. Your stuff is top drawer, but hers is in the display window. Your writing is good, you just need to think of your audience more to make your work great.

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lmao

you my dear have been 1 of the best fantasy ever haved

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by Anonymous09/24/12

Wet

Loved this now to find a coworker to pleasure this wet pussy I have right now!

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by Anonymous04/10/16

Lame

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by Anonymous01/17/17

Hot!

That was so hot! I came so hard imaginingdoing that to you. :) please do more audios! :)

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