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by WickedEve02/28/09

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Wow, this part is fantastic!
tongue-tied tough bird
sitting on links, snagged lips,
rolled eyes balls made to suckle,
sent careening off

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by GuiltyPleasure02/28/09

Damn!

Eve beat me to it, the bitch! I had picked out those same lines but the whole works so well. Makes me want more....

Tess

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by tazz31709/19/12

A BETA TRANSPOSED TO THE FROST

when hypo sets in will he accede. TK U MLJ LV NV

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