by greenmountaineer
that your poem was recommended, yet not a single comment. People can be so friggin' anal at times.
As for your poem, I love this style, but something about the parenthesis makes me a bit uncomfortable. I adore the first verse ( voice.)
All in all, I enjoyed your work, all of it, I also, do not always comment but I intend to remedy.
I enjoyed your poem today, keep up the good work!