For my tastes, you had some great parts mixed in with some not-so-great parts. Seems like you struggled with Dad's perspective because he was tender in the beginning but coarser towards the end. You honestly had me with you here and there but seriously lost me when you started out your description of their first anal with "after her morning dump." Dude, there is absolutely nothing erotic about those four words as an introduction to anything. But maybe that's just me.
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Anonymous03/05/09
not great, but not bad
Agree with "Enjoyable". Story isn't the best of all, but it definately isn't the worst I come across either. Keep at it, and they'll get better.
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Anonymous04/30/09
correction
Not bad, but for the record:
HPV = Human Papilloma Virus.
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Anonymous08/07/09
Very Good.
I enjoyed reading this story, it is quite good. You should continue to write more stories.
just for clarification its human papiloma virus otherwise known as HPV,
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Anonymous03/09/11
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You really need an editor before posting another one like this. It's a decent story but your layout of events and over0use of commas is very distracting.
Something about Daddy/Daughter love stories makes my blood boil, especially one written as sensitively as this. Thanks for such a rare, stimulating tale. Jim
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Anonymous04/23/16
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Needs. More sexual detail its hot and all but could use a little more detail in the bedroom.
English
great
It was a great story. i liked it. 5/5 woodies
Just ok
It was an ok story didnt have many details and she seemed like she was 13 rather than 18
Enjoyable
Nicely told and not overdone , Just told a little too fast .
In and out
For my tastes, you had some great parts mixed in with some not-so-great parts. Seems like you struggled with Dad's perspective because he was tender in the beginning but coarser towards the end. You honestly had me with you here and there but seriously lost me when you started out your description of their first anal with "after her morning dump." Dude, there is absolutely nothing erotic about those four words as an introduction to anything. But maybe that's just me.
not great, but not bad
Agree with "Enjoyable". Story isn't the best of all, but it definately isn't the worst I come across either. Keep at it, and they'll get better.
correction
Not bad, but for the record:
HPV = Human Papilloma Virus.
Very Good.
I enjoyed reading this story, it is quite good. You should continue to write more stories.
just for clarification its human papiloma virus otherwise known as HPV,
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You really need an editor before posting another one like this. It's a decent story but your layout of events and over0use of commas is very distracting.
I loved it!
Something about Daddy/Daughter love stories makes my blood boil, especially one written as sensitively as this. Thanks for such a rare, stimulating tale. Jim
0
Needs. More sexual detail its hot and all but could use a little more detail in the bedroom.
Kissing
Oh! Yeah! I do like kissing and I do like this story. Don
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