somehow this seems like the beginning of a longer story,is that your intention here?
Was my first attempt at an adult story and was simply a one shot type deal.
Bt it kinda leaves u wanting more...... xoxo Aria
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nice beginning,but.....
somehow this seems like the beginning of a longer story,is that your intention here?
Not really
Was my first attempt at an adult story and was simply a one shot type deal.
Kool!!!!!!!!!
Bt it kinda leaves u wanting more......
xoxo
Aria
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