That was a nice Chapter that you wrote. I like the way that you are developing the story line between Susan and Walt. I can hardly wait to see what you do in the next chapter when you bring Susan, Sherry and Liz together to talk about Audrey's affair with them. Don't mind the other two idiots in the left your comments today because they must not read much of your writing. Keep up the good work.
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Nice Chapter!!!!
That was a nice Chapter that you wrote. I like the way that you are developing the story line between Susan and Walt. I can hardly wait to see what you do in the next chapter when you bring Susan, Sherry and Liz together to talk about Audrey's affair with them. Don't mind the other two idiots in the left your comments today because they must not read much of your writing. Keep up the good work.
Sell your Keyboard
You can erase my comment, but you can't erace my score. I still say, sell your keyboard. Everything you should be allowed to do with a computer can be done with a mouse.
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