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If That's Your Excuse Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/20/09

Please Continue

I hope you continue on with this story

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by PennLady05/22/09

Good but confusing

The constant POV switch, with no warning, is confusing. Several times I have to backtrack and figure out who is speaking. Otherwise, very good.

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by jessiexjay11/18/11

I like this story, but often get confused with the POV switching. It would be easier to stay with it if you changed the font to bold or italics when changing from character to character. other than that I give 5 stars.

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