Not His Type

FInally...

It took me a while to find this but it was worth the wait. I love these kind of stories. Well written, just the right amount of sex. Bravo!

Sorry I haven't commented yet :)

I simply to say loved it very much that I favorited it. The characters have some flaws like a normal person and also have some unique personalities and quality. And I loved the smex scenes :) hehe

It was well written indeed, although the story itself did not appeal to me at all. Lechery is a sign of a weak character and thus pathetic, so my idea of a happy ending was more like him ending under a bus. Mark somehow becoming attracted to him was also a development which I did not completely understand; one nice trait in a person (being nice to the kid) hardly makes his many vices evaporate. But well, thats just my moral ranting on the substance; the writing was excellent ;).

I felt like it used to be longer, but it's pretty amazing, still.

I like this story a lot and the people in it. It was odd having only Matt's point of view and not Mark's but it worked for this story. I'm glad Matt found the love he had never had and didn't even know he needed.

Interesting story

Personality extremes; Matt is a self-serving asshole who gives homeless men cigarettes and like's his neighbor's kid, but you could tell that his insecuirty and empty lifestyle was getting to him. Not sure of Mark's motivation other than seeing a slightly different side than he expected.

"Why not?" I asked finally. I wasn't upset, just curious. Whatever it was we'd work around it, and if not, I honestly didn't care,
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he doesn't care??? then why did he ask a question if he didn't care??

i immediately didn't like your matt character. i'm guessing you wanted us to get that impression of a self-absorbed ass hole. i still didn't like him by the end of the 1st page/chap- so i skipped to the last page and i still didn't like him.

it wasn't a horrible story though- you tell/write a good story- characters, dialogs, settings, etc

Please come back and write more!

I LOVE THIS STORY! Read it at least 20 times if not more. What is wrong with all these comments lately?! People, you are seriously missing the point about Matt. He build this whole cocky facade about him and Mark saw right through it. If you want to start quoting the story why not go for:
"Only because I was afraid no-one else would remember or care. Better not to test the relationships one had at all.
Ok, so I had abandonment issues. The fear of somehow being unlovable was a monster in the darkness of my life. The sting of rejection with me was the sharp edge of a knife."

His mom ran out on him and his dad was a hateful asshole. Of course he has issues. Stop judging his public mask and look below the surface.

Just four words....

FAN~FREAKIN~TAS~TIC!!! Loved all the details, interplay, dancing around, and what seemed to be will-never-end, games; before the supurb climax. Five star read ALL the way!

This was so beautiful.

I love the way you write, the way you explain things, the fact that this is so different from the usual stories. Your all in his head, in his emotions, you have your readers feeling what they feel, sympathizing even. beautiful.

That was really beautiful. I love all the undercurrents of there being more to him than meets the eye, but having him still be shallow in so many ways. Having Mark be a challenge in the beginning, whose standing on principle led to him re-evaluating who he was and what he wanted. I loved the ways Mark showed he was anything but unmoved by him when he gave him a pet and threw him a party. I loved how he saw right threw him. It was a really well-done and beautiful story.

Kudos!

OMG! This is a hell of a story! The twists and all that was fantastic! The story really thrilled me as it went further! The cat, the party and the Im not your type either part was great!

This was a wonderful story. I love how they discovered each other.

One of my favorites

Time after time I come back to this story, and it never disappoints!

So sweet

This story always makes me cry. Matt is so sweet and so needy until Mark comes along and sees the true person behind the mask. Love it.

Awesome story

I read this story over and over...it is sooo greatly written and it is really nice how the two boys discovered each other.

All-time favourite. Wonderful

I love this story and your style showing real insight into the human condition. Even as a mature hertero female coming from a loving home I can really identify with Matt and live vicariously for a moment hoping my "Mark" turns up one day in my life. Thanks for sharing.

wow!

Loved it!

REFRESHING!

my mind...it's gone somewhere

ok so that was intense and ridiculously well written and fabulous. well done in a big way. i loved every part, which sort of surprised me, and i really liked the way stuff that didn't make Matt feel anything was just glossed over, very cool.

I feel like i wanted more in the ending, but then it would have been too-too-cute.

i can tell that i'll keep coming back to this one

Quite delightful!

Makes me wish for a "Mark" of my own! You've done very well...Matt and Mark are real, and thoroughly likable!

Loved it.

Really sweet story , opposites trully attract :-]

So well done...

One of the best I've read. Not just on this site, but anywhere. Thank you so much.

Well done. You wrote a story about a slut and made him not-a-slut. You wrote a romance. How I wish more people here would write romance.

Oh no! Your story is excellent, but you've only written one story! Please (pretty please!) could we have some more?

Found Love

Mark found out that someone he rejected at first finally made him realize what he wasn't getting from his fast tricks in the restroom.

beautiful

There's not much more to say

ONE OF THE BEST

I THINK THAT YOUR STORY IS ONE OF THE BEST ON THIS SIGHT. HOW I WISH THAT YOU RETURN HERE WITH MORE OF YOUR WORKS.ANYWAY , THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS GEM OF A SHORT NOVELLA , WITH ITS DEFINITELY AMASING COMPOSITION OF THE PLOT AND GREAT DEPICTION OF ALL THE CHARACTERS, AND THEIR EVOLVING WITH THEIR RELATIONS ,AS IF I WAS FOLLOWING SCIENES FROM THE REAL LIFE.

Excellent!

excellently written and exceptionally narrated. among my personal favorites and am sure a lot of readers will agree with me when i say we would love to read some more from you.

Lovely story

Thought this was beautiful.
Thankyou

Oh, no! This is your only story! Please write more?

Fantastic Story!

Wow, you gotta write more stories, this was fantastic!

One of the best stories on this site.

Amazing

This is by far the best story of all genres I have read on this site. I sincerely hope, encourage, and pray that this is not your last story. Thank you for your efforts.

This is amazing.

This was wonderful! One of the best stories I've ever read on this site. Stellar writing and superb story line. Simply amazing!

Your characters are real, believable and with a lot of depth. You've all the hallmarks of being a good writer with a scope of expanding your horizons and ameliorating what is already a first rate writing. More power to you, brother !

Wonderful!

I came to this story on suggestion from another one, and I am so glad I did. I found myself reading with wonder and intent, not knowing how the story would end and then wanting to read more once it was over. This is so much more than the standard erotica. I hope to read more from you. Peace.

The Best!

This story is amazing and I love the way it moved. I thought it was great how Mark actually saw who Matt real was. Keep up the great writing! We all want more.

Please keep writing!

I realize it's been years, but I do wish you "take up your pen" again. Cheers!

Just Wondering...

It would be amazing to see things from Mark's P.O.V. Wonder where you disappeared to...

jace

weirdly written.. kind of lazy third person. skips times and almost reads like point form sentences.

One of my favorites.

To the previous commenter: this is absolutely written in first person with a nonomnicient narrator.
The voyage of change is do well done. He's not very self aware but he tells us of his troubled spirit. Wonderful. I think he is more surprised by the end than we are.

Superb !!

I absolutely loved this. If there's anything I must complain about, is that the story is too short.
I loved the two main characters - Matt and Mark - and although I could see they would end up together, I loved reading about the development of their relationship. I felt the pain that gripped Matt's heart when he was so coldly rejected - You're not my type. I felt like hugging him. His friends were sometimes clueless about his feelings. Matt was more than he appeared to be; he fiercely needed to be loved and it was Mark that saw that. This is an amazing story. Please give us more.

best story i've read in this whole ....Literotica......

Brilliant

Thank you for sharing your gift with us, this is one of the best stories I have ever read,

Thank you

Again....

I'll never get tired of this story and I keep finding myself reading it and finding it just as awesome as I did the first time.

I just had to read this again .... I WISH I COULD GIVE YOU 10 STARS !!

It is soo good ! OMG, Matt is such a needy, loving, sensitive guy ! I was near to tears most of the time - he was soo lovable and had such a huge heart - taking a child to his heart, and helping to take care of him, helping a homeless guy ... so much about Matt you'd never expect!

His behaviour at the club could be taken for that of a slut, but he was really trying to get attention and looking for love. I love Matt to bits, and just feel like hugging him.
Thank you for this story. I CAN'T UNDERSTAND WHY YOU WON'T KEEP ON WRITING !!!

Definitely one of the very best stories on this site - always worth another read.

I love this

I don't know how many times I have read this story, but I love it. Something about the love stories get me. I don't really like the ones that are sex for sex's sake.

please ,please , add more to this story...the best story on this site by far.....thank you