That was another nice Chapter that you wrote. I like how you're adding more characters to the plot. I can hardly wait to see what you do in the next chapter with Walt And the Specs.
This is going to be epic, i can feel it in my bones. Walt for me this story is like the beginning of a perfect swingers party there are just so many possibilities laid out in front of us, your readers. So just like that party the anticipation is building as your narrative develops, I do believe this could be your magnus opus. There are so many options being laid within your plot and plenty of room for you to spring those orgasmic surprises that characterise your work.
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Pulitizer!
Thats what I'm thinking. This here is some mighty fine fucking and sucking and such, who are they again?
Another Nice Chapter!!!
That was another nice Chapter that you wrote. I like how you're adding more characters to the plot. I can hardly wait to see what you do in the next chapter with Walt And the Specs.
great story
keep up the good work ...great story
All things considered
This is going to be epic, i can feel it in my bones. Walt for me this story is like the beginning of a perfect swingers party there are just so many possibilities laid out in front of us, your readers. So just like that party the anticipation is building as your narrative develops, I do believe this could be your magnus opus. There are so many options being laid within your plot and plenty of room for you to spring those orgasmic surprises that characterise your work.
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