All Comments on 'Magazine Girl'

If anything is wrong here, it is the choice I made for a category. I don't read

this category myself, because it sounds like a lot of the following: violent

abuse, rape, and tying the woman's toy dog to a tree and running it down

with a riding lawn mower. I wish I had put this in another category, because

the key in my story is "coercion" or "blackmail". The beautiful victim is taken

advantage of, succumbing to ecstasy and enjoying her fate at the hands

of the much older and experienced man. Not enough abuse. I realize I

picked the wrong category, but I see all the hits and reads.