All Comments on 'Treating Myself'

Took me back to when I started fucking my wife, thats how it started, three times anight is where it ends......sofar.

The art of any writing is to take the reader someplace, and the reader's focus is on the story. You did that so well that I really couldn't begin to discuss technique. You are, simply put, very good!

great piece ,i love it an would love to know if you did it alone!