All Comments on 'Horrible Night Set Right'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
nice combo

Very believable and all the more erotic because of it! More soon I hope!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Great

LOve it so erotic can't wait to see what happens next

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Good for now

It's good for now, but I couldn't wait the moment in which the brother cums deep inside sister's pussy, maybe without any protection, with a risk of pregnancy... wow!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
good but

good but it really needs a second chapter to tell us what happens next do the parents find out,do they end up fucking,does she get pregnant,do they end up moving south together as man and wife all this could be in chapter two and three keep up the good writeing but keep it realistic and keep the sex just between the two of them

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Hottttt!

Really hot and sexy but when she first starts to suck him she says "I hope you like this as much as I did"; she just atarted ??? Please keep in touch with your story and read it back to yourself . Keep going .

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

You should really continue the story I give it an A+!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

A real good story. Hope it continues

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