I didn't read all of it. I get turned-off from these stories that tries to put the reader in the story with "you". What's so hard about giving the neighbor a name?!? It ruins the fantasy/realism by trying to make me a participant in the story.
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Anonymous03/19/09
loved it
It's a story told first person, kinda like a POV porn video. Some writers make it work, some don't I thought this writer did a damn fine job. my hard cock does so anyway!
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Turned-off
I didn't read all of it. I get turned-off from these stories that tries to put the reader in the story with "you". What's so hard about giving the neighbor a name?!? It ruins the fantasy/realism by trying to make me a participant in the story.
loved it
It's a story told first person, kinda like a POV porn video. Some writers make it work, some don't I thought this writer did a damn fine job. my hard cock does so anyway!
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