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by Anonymous02/15/10

I can't stand stories that pretend to be talking to me, the reader!
Stories - to me - should be third person, past tense.

To paraphrase your first two sentences -
"Her college classes were finally out for the day. Her rehearsals were done and her last meeting was over and it was dark as she headed out the door. "

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