You have an amazing way of telling your story and I think you should keep your style . Enjoyed it .
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Anonymous12/30/09
Just a thought ...
For some reason, you used "too" instead of "to" rather often, not to mention not capitalizing "I" as a pronoun. Though these & other technicalities are perhaps trivial to some, they take away from otherwise interesting stories. "Your" instead of "you're" can be confusing to the reader when not used properly. "Their" in place of "they're" as well.
If you aren't sure which to use, simply avoid contractions altogether. Many authors do. If you assume that only English teachers care about spelling & grammar, you will be robbed of potential readers. They could see inattention to detail as the author thinking that the reader doesn't deserve even a simple proof-read. There are plenty of volunteers who offer to edit stories here. Try them out.
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You have an amazing way of telling your story and I think you should keep your style . Enjoyed it .
Just a thought ...
For some reason, you used "too" instead of "to" rather often, not to mention not capitalizing "I" as a pronoun. Though these & other technicalities are perhaps trivial to some, they take away from otherwise interesting stories. "Your" instead of "you're" can be confusing to the reader when not used properly. "Their" in place of "they're" as well.
If you aren't sure which to use, simply avoid contractions altogether. Many authors do. If you assume that only English teachers care about spelling & grammar, you will be robbed of potential readers. They could see inattention to detail as the author thinking that the reader doesn't deserve even a simple proof-read. There are plenty of volunteers who offer to edit stories here. Try them out.
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