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by otiose_palaver

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Wow. What a gem.

Wow, you can write girl. This story made me hot and longing for the summer. Beautifully descriptive. While i read it, i was there.

The only thing that i would avoid if i were you is the switching of past and present tense. Other than that, change nothing, it's perfect as it is.

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