Sleeping Sarah Gets Tucked in Tight

Not hot....

...just gross

BAD - please remove this rubbish!

And please, Lit, introduce a zero rating...

Absolutely Disgusting!!!!

That is without a doubt, the most vile and disgusting story that I have ever read on this site. The author should seriously consider seeking professional help. Anyone who could think up something like this clearly has NO respect for women and I cannot imagine them having any redeeming qualities. Please do not post any other stories.

Truly Troubling!

First, I realize this is only a story. I try not to be judgmental because everyone has their kinks, but I find it unfathomable that people would find this titillating rather than troubling.

Way too crude!

Not needed nor wanted. Totally rethink your style!

a 0 is too good for you

You are sick! This was awful and disgusting!

pretty disturbing!

I'm all for fantasy fun, but this was pretty tasteless and cruel! Way too predatory and not erotic.

pretty disturbing!

I'm all for fantasy fun, but this was pretty tasteless and cruel! Way too predatory and not erotic.

*Laughs my ass off*

I just want to say that I am strangely proud that so many people hate my story and I will keep it up forever just because of it. I think it's hilarious that fantasy incestuous abuse is OK as long as everyone likes it. Thank you, internet morality police.

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Well looking at your profile you are certainly someone who doesn't care what other people think. I am certain that if I were meet you in a dark alley I would run as fast as my legs could carry me. I hope your swinger friends are as sick and scary as you. I wouldn't want you to really hurt someone.

it's her choice to write but I wasn't big on it

It is ok for the author to write this story and I read it based on the poor reviews. I agree the story is not something I would normally enjoy or read.

I don't plan to read future stories by Allybear.
There are many more stories posted each day that are well written, enjoyable & erotic to read.

wow...really people?

Why would you even read a story containing rape and incest if you are so against it? This is a work of fiction people, and no matter how fucked up and gross you may think it is, it is almost garauteed that someone willalso find something fucked up about you and your fantasies. So unless you have constructive criticism, you should keep your immature comments to yourself.

Freedom of speech

Can't believe what i'm reading.... not the story but the comments. If you don't like the subject matter, tough, don't read it. I personally think the story could have been longer, and a little better written. But all in all, I hope you keep writing. And if your taking suggestions, add a little more Control and a little less brutality. Of course I say write what you want to read, so fuck me if you like it better this way. Keep up the good work.

Hot

Honestly I wanted to rate this a 75%, but all the negativity below bumped my rating a notch. I'm not really into the dyke porn, as such, but I do really like your writing style and the evil mommy is, well, hot. Pervert on the erotica site! Yay!

I love your story

It's good to see a story that isn't enslaved by political correctness.

Confused

That story was just too mean...and enslaved my political correctness^???WTF?

perfection

This is exactly what I have been looking for, it is just so perfect! Please please continue!!!

This story was so hot. I get wet every time I read it. Write more please!

lmfao

Im a lil disappointed, cuz the description sounded like a really hot story and I was excited. But that aside, that was just great XD it was so fucked up it was downright hilarious XD

this story

This need to be put inthe rape section

Good mommy

Thanks for sharing this! I enjoyed it. I hope you flesh this out, I think I am not the only one that would enjoy more details!