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Not up to your standards
Hi,
Have been ur fan since i found this site ages back... the particular story just does't look like you... like the way u have written the mother series and also how u moved in to the tranny scene easily..
Cheers,
A fan
Fair Story!
That was a fair story with good writing but not to your standards of other stories you've written. I liked the mother series a lot better than the story.
bad twist
this is not a non-consent story. It's a fantasy or romance one. I am not impressed at your attempt to trickery. The setting was great, the police woman's behavior erratic, but not totally unbelievable. But I lost my hard on as soon as you turned her in to your girl friend.
Damn it.
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