All Comments on 'A whisper in the wind'

had some fresh ideas, quality lines, but the poem as a whole sort of felt too crowded. If you're going for word sounds I'd make certain changes, if you're concentrating on images I'd go different as well. It's rare we can have both at the same time, so I think that's my only helpful hint, go all the way with sound or lighten up the sounds and hit with imagery.

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