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Hahaha
Fantastic piece of fiction:)
Keep writing..Lol
Voll Krass!!
Du schreibst sehr gut!
Ausgezeichenent.
es ist so wissentlich und herzlich schreibe
Great start.
Pretty good story, a little short but not bad. May I suggest making the larger paragraphs smaller to make it a bit easier to read.
Very good
That story was one of the best. Lots of attention to detail, loved it. Keep writing about Dr. Sara Jayne's adventure discovering life. I'll be a big fan.
Good Story Development
For as short of a story as it was I greatly enjoyed the flow, I do wish however that this were written as a novel, I would love to see the characters more, pardon the pun, fleshed out.
awesome
that was interesting n hot xD but there should be a continuation to this :) thank u for writing something good :)
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