All Comments on 'Confectionery'

by Tzara

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Epmd607Epmd607about 15 years ago
good game

candy hearts et all. Would of worked as well with more pronouns.

annaswirlsannaswirlsabout 15 years ago
your poem

Mentioned in the New Poem Recommendations thread: http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?p=30341931#post30341931

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 15 years ago
Ho,Ho,Ho

ha,ha,ha.

But they puddle when laid

good enjambment (learn it from me?)

the rest of it goes, where I kind of expect it, and gives me that fires that burn from deep within feeling, if you know what I mean. Except, I'm better at it.

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