All Comments on 'Mum. The Woman.'

EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I've read alot of these stories but got to say yours looks more like how it would actually happen. Very well written and by the way, I like long stories with lots of detail but this was perfect for a short story. Hope to see a continuing of it.

Like it but more of Holy Orders Please

Short in this case - and to the point? - was great. You captured the sudden surprise of desire in a situation that moved so rapidly neither of them took the time to consider anything but how they needed to needed to feel how good they were together. Yes, short in this case is much better than long.

It appears that Mom thru all caution to the winds. Good tale as written. The tale could have another page for the morning after. Enjoyed your efforts thanks.

I myself would prefer to have a longer story!!

I will say that I enjoyed the story, and would like to find out what happened the next morning, and the next week and so on. I don't know if I have read any of your other stories, but I like stories with a lot of information in them, It seems to build the characters and make them real. Thanks for this fine post, and hope to read more of your fine work.......Rich

but this was too short so the story never developed properly.

I rather like your longer stories. The short stories are like a ( wam bam thank you mam). But that's my opinion. Thanks again.

Adored it. Short, sharp to the point but I guess being an old mommy lover from way back this is my sort of story. More please and soon

Cheers

I would have gonne down and ripped his head off for calling my mum a bitch.

...is great! It highlights a mother's desperate need for her boy's big stiff prick to fill and flood her twat, as well as the better known son's desire to shove his prick up his mommy's cunt. Dear Mikro, maybe share your excellent stories between the shorter and the longer ones?

I liked it..a lot!..anal yet next

Great story, keep it going please.

The action with Mom was not long enough but OK.

Continue your story, fill all her holes like the man she was fucking did. I liked part 1 make part 2 hotter.

Good story, good length....Thanks

I enjoy 1 to 3 pages...after that it gets tedious.

Thanks

I much prefer well evolved characters, developed plot line(s) with romantic, sexual and sensual subplots. This short story was good for what it was.

Good story. Very erotic. I liked it. There's something very erotic to secretly spy on your mom with another man, a stranger. Even more erotic than yourself seducing her. Probably it has something to do with part of your mind registering shock, jealousy, sense of betrayal that doing that with a stranger and another part of your mind looking at her as a gorgeous, sexy, naked, wanton woman bringing up erotic longings in you that may or may not be attainable.