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Aliens Use Sex to Invade Humans Ch. 01-02

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by Anonymous03/14/09

Good, but you can do better!

Walter, a great start & as ever, your inimitable "feel" for multisex in all forms is fab fun. But at the slight (I hope) risk of offending your pride in uniqueness, may I recommend you read The Blob Revisited (storiesonline.net/story/49377) by The Slutman, and Blackdog's Horse Soldiers (storiesonline.net/story/37498) for a tasty sense of how overpowering the sex drive ignited by aliens can be. Make no mistake, you ARE one of the greatest EVER on Literotica, but occasionally you repeat verbatim pieces of prose, so I hope you can dig a little deeper to make this effort as original as it deserves to be! Upward (schwing!) & onward!

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