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by Anonymous03/15/09

Probably

One of the BEST I have read yet as far as friends becoming lovers. Incredible. Wow. Amazing. Loved the storyline as well as the characters. Brilliant writing. Will be looking for more from you. Thank you.

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by Anonymous03/15/09

outstanding!

Excellent work. The imagery is beautiful. I could quibble that the ending was a bit abrupt, but overall, the story is absolutely excellent.
-- KK in Texas

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